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		<title>Comment on One or Two? by Barbara McNichol</title>
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		<dc:creator>Barbara McNichol</dc:creator>
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		<description>Good idea, Steve. I&#039;ll add it to the list. Thanks for the example.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Good idea, Steve. I&#8217;ll add it to the list. Thanks for the example.</p>
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		<title>Comment on One or Two? by Barbara McNichol</title>
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		<dc:creator>Barbara McNichol</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 19 Apr 2012 20:38:25 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>You&#039;re fun! Thanks!</description>
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		<title>Comment on One or Two? by Barbara McNichol</title>
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		<dc:creator>Barbara McNichol</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 19 Apr 2012 20:38:00 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>This one is in my Word Trippers book/ebook and I&#039;ll add it to the list. Thanks.

Every day, everyday – In the two-word adverbial phrase, “day” refers to the time between sunrise and sunset; “every” describes the word day. “Every day we call our customers.” Everyday (without a space) is an adjective that precedes the noun it describes. “It’s an everyday occurrence.”</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>This one is in my Word Trippers book/ebook and I&#8217;ll add it to the list. Thanks.</p>
<p>Every day, everyday – In the two-word adverbial phrase, “day” refers to the time between sunrise and sunset; “every” describes the word day. “Every day we call our customers.” Everyday (without a space) is an adjective that precedes the noun it describes. “It’s an everyday occurrence.”</p>
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		<title>Comment on One or Two? by Barbara McNichol</title>
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		<dc:creator>Barbara McNichol</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 19 Apr 2012 20:36:34 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>This one is in my Word Trippers book and ebook:
Awhile, a while – The dictionary says “awhile” means “for a while” (that is, for a period of time). Therefore, it’s redundant to say “for awhile” because it’s like saying “for for a while.” “Let’s get together awhile. We can drink and enjoy visiting for a while.”

I&#039;ll also add it to our list!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>This one is in my Word Trippers book and ebook:<br />
Awhile, a while – The dictionary says “awhile” means “for a while” (that is, for a period of time). Therefore, it’s redundant to say “for awhile” because it’s like saying “for for a while.” “Let’s get together awhile. We can drink and enjoy visiting for a while.”</p>
<p>I&#8217;ll also add it to our list!</p>
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		<title>Comment on One or Two? by Barbara McNichol</title>
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		<dc:creator>Barbara McNichol</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 19 Apr 2012 20:34:04 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Good idea, thanks!</description>
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		<title>Comment on One or Two? by Cathy B</title>
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		<dc:creator>Cathy B</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 18 Apr 2012 11:31:41 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>What confuses me is: drydock, dry dock and dry-dock... Hope I see it soon in the 1/2 words site.

Thanks,
Cathy from New Hampshire</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>What confuses me is: drydock, dry dock and dry-dock&#8230; Hope I see it soon in the 1/2 words site.</p>
<p>Thanks,<br />
Cathy from New Hampshire</p>
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		<title>Comment on One or Two? by Lee</title>
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		<dc:creator>Lee</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 17 Apr 2012 22:51:21 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Works for me!</description>
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		<title>Comment on One or Two? by Nancy LaBella</title>
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		<dc:creator>Nancy LaBella</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 17 Apr 2012 21:38:57 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>How about adding some time/sometime to your list?
Thank you!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>How about adding some time/sometime to your list?<br />
Thank you!</p>
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		<title>Comment on One or Two? by Susan Saltzman</title>
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		<dc:creator>Susan Saltzman</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 17 Apr 2012 20:45:38 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>This combo doesn&#039;t confuse me, but apparently many people (look around at signs in windows of businesses) are confused by it.

every day vs. everyday</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>This combo doesn&#8217;t confuse me, but apparently many people (look around at signs in windows of businesses) are confused by it.</p>
<p>every day vs. everyday</p>
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		<title>Comment on One or Two? by Marylyn Rands</title>
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		<dc:creator>Marylyn Rands</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 17 Apr 2012 20:09:07 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>How about &quot;awhile&quot; vs. &quot;a while&quot;?</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>How about &#8220;awhile&#8221; vs. &#8220;a while&#8221;?</p>
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