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	<description>Editing angles to improve your writing by Barbara McNichol, nonfiction book editor with offices in Colorado and Arizona</description>
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		<title>Comment on What Makes a Good Book Subtitle? by matt phillips</title>
		<link>http://nonfictionbookeditor.com/2010/08/09/what-makes-a-good-subtitle/comment-page-1/#comment-1001</link>
		<dc:creator>matt phillips</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 01 Feb 2012 13:57:06 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>pleasure speaking with you this early morning.
Book Proposal being sent.
thanks for the consideration.
Call me anytime at work 914-633-9400</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>pleasure speaking with you this early morning.<br />
Book Proposal being sent.<br />
thanks for the consideration.<br />
Call me anytime at work 914-633-9400</p>
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		<title>Comment on One Word or Two? Common Words that Get Confused by Barbara McNichol</title>
		<link>http://nonfictionbookeditor.com/2012/01/25/one-word-or-two-common-words-that-get-confused/comment-page-1/#comment-985</link>
		<dc:creator>Barbara McNichol</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 26 Jan 2012 18:45:19 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Yes, look for more in the next installment. Thanks for your suggestions, Rebecca.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Yes, look for more in the next installment. Thanks for your suggestions, Rebecca.</p>
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		<title>Comment on One Word or Two? Common Words that Get Confused by Rebecca Morgan</title>
		<link>http://nonfictionbookeditor.com/2012/01/25/one-word-or-two-common-words-that-get-confused/comment-page-1/#comment-984</link>
		<dc:creator>Rebecca Morgan</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 26 Jan 2012 18:03:43 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks for addressing my issue here!

These are some others I see commonly mixed up: makeup/make up, followup/follow up, handout/hand out and carryon/carry on.

Let&#039;s see if we can come up with a comprehensive list!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks for addressing my issue here!</p>
<p>These are some others I see commonly mixed up: makeup/make up, followup/follow up, handout/hand out and carryon/carry on.</p>
<p>Let&#8217;s see if we can come up with a comprehensive list!</p>
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		<title>Comment on One Word or Two? Common Words that Get Confused by Mellanie True Hills</title>
		<link>http://nonfictionbookeditor.com/2012/01/25/one-word-or-two-common-words-that-get-confused/comment-page-1/#comment-983</link>
		<dc:creator>Mellanie True Hills</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 26 Jan 2012 17:38:21 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Follow up vs. followup - is a commonly confused duo.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Follow up vs. followup &#8211; is a commonly confused duo.</p>
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		<title>Comment on One Word or Two? Common Words that Get Confused by Jamie Winkelman</title>
		<link>http://nonfictionbookeditor.com/2012/01/25/one-word-or-two-common-words-that-get-confused/comment-page-1/#comment-982</link>
		<dc:creator>Jamie Winkelman</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 26 Jan 2012 16:33:35 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I often get tripped up by “followup” and “follow up.” I’m forever going to my dictionary to make sure I use the correct word(s) in the right context.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I often get tripped up by “followup” and “follow up.” I’m forever going to my dictionary to make sure I use the correct word(s) in the right context.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Write from Your Soul &#8211; Here&#8217;s How by P Katz</title>
		<link>http://nonfictionbookeditor.com/2011/12/02/write-from-your-soul-heres-how/comment-page-1/#comment-778</link>
		<dc:creator>P Katz</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 07 Dec 2011 02:44:50 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>this message really hit home for me. Thanks, P</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>this message really hit home for me. Thanks, P</p>
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		<title>Comment on 10-Step Checklist for Writing Your Book Title, Subtitle by Barbara McNichol</title>
		<link>http://nonfictionbookeditor.com/2011/06/14/10-step-checklist-for-writing-your-book-title-subtitle/comment-page-1/#comment-744</link>
		<dc:creator>Barbara McNichol</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 28 Nov 2011 15:06:56 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks for your comment. I encourage you to contact Susan Kendrick for additional helping on titles and back cover copy. susan@writetoyourmarket.com
Best, Barbara</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks for your comment. I encourage you to contact Susan Kendrick for additional helping on titles and back cover copy. <a href="mailto:susan@writetoyourmarket.com">susan@writetoyourmarket.com</a><br />
Best, Barbara</p>
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		<title>Comment on 7 Writing Mistakes Editors are Constantly Fixing by J.P. Hansen</title>
		<link>http://nonfictionbookeditor.com/2011/11/17/7-writing-mistakes-editors-are-constantly-fixing/comment-page-1/#comment-740</link>
		<dc:creator>J.P. Hansen</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 27 Nov 2011 17:53:18 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>How about not using the sentence&#039;s true verb? Even seasoned writers occasionally send to an editor a sentence such as &quot;he stood there watching the sunset.&quot; It should read &quot;he watched the sunset.&quot; It&#039;s a subset of #5, but I had to mention it—a pet peeve.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>How about not using the sentence&#8217;s true verb? Even seasoned writers occasionally send to an editor a sentence such as &#8220;he stood there watching the sunset.&#8221; It should read &#8220;he watched the sunset.&#8221; It&#8217;s a subset of #5, but I had to mention it—a pet peeve.</p>
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		<title>Comment on 10-Step Checklist for Writing Your Book Title, Subtitle by Alvin</title>
		<link>http://nonfictionbookeditor.com/2011/06/14/10-step-checklist-for-writing-your-book-title-subtitle/comment-page-1/#comment-735</link>
		<dc:creator>Alvin</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 27 Nov 2011 03:32:25 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I found this page on Google...

I&#039;m trying to figure out a subtitle to my new ebook I&#039;m working on, entitled &quot;Move the Chain&quot;, which is a step-by-step guide for NFL undrafted players on how to pursue a pro football career even though they may not have been drafted.

I got some good tips from your page, thanks!  I just have to keep working to figure out the perfect subtitle.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I found this page on Google&#8230;</p>
<p>I&#8217;m trying to figure out a subtitle to my new ebook I&#8217;m working on, entitled &#8220;Move the Chain&#8221;, which is a step-by-step guide for NFL undrafted players on how to pursue a pro football career even though they may not have been drafted.</p>
<p>I got some good tips from your page, thanks!  I just have to keep working to figure out the perfect subtitle.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Dan Poynter&#8217;s Secrets of Book Promotion Program by Carolyn Howard-Johnson</title>
		<link>http://nonfictionbookeditor.com/2011/11/05/dan-poynters-secrets-of-book-promotion-program/comment-page-1/#comment-698</link>
		<dc:creator>Carolyn Howard-Johnson</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 06 Nov 2011 02:25:30 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Barbara, I&#039;m glad that you agree with me that this kind of a program can be very  helpful for authors.

Best,
Carolyn Howard-Johnson
Excited about the second edition (now award-winning!) of The Frugal Book Promoter,
www.budurl.com/FrugalBkPromo</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Barbara, I&#8217;m glad that you agree with me that this kind of a program can be very  helpful for authors.</p>
<p>Best,<br />
Carolyn Howard-Johnson<br />
Excited about the second edition (now award-winning!) of The Frugal Book Promoter,<br />
<a href="http://www.budurl.com/FrugalBkPromo" rel="nofollow">http://www.budurl.com/FrugalBkPromo</a></p>
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